Paper 1: Sample Response 8 (Men's Health iii)
This is the third of our Paper 1 samples on Men's Health front covers. To date, we have published two other samples, one which is excellent, see this link, and one that is somewhat less successful, see this link. The sample published here, on this page, is very strong, but has a few limitations. It's a well focused response, developing from a reasonably clear thesis, and is mainly well written. Arguably, the response...