Paper 1: Sample Response 10 (Justin Gatlin)
In many respects, this second of four sample Paper 1 exemplars based on an online article from The Sun, is quite strong. It does everything right. And yet, it's also missing something across the board. For that reason, it isn't as strong as the previously published exemplar found here. That page explains the entire exam process in more detail. Use this exemplar to demonstrate to students what a very good response...