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2014 Paper 1 (HL) Fatherhood (Part 2)

The following exemplar is a student response to the May 2014 Higher Level Paper 1 examination. It compliments an earlier post about these texts with the goal of providing a range of student writing on the site. A third exemplar will be published soon, allowing you and your students a wide variety of samples from the same exam. While not a perfect response, this exemplar is excellent. The scoring is explained below....


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