May 2023 Paper 2: Sample Response 5 (Question 1)
For this Paper 2 exemplar, the student answered question #1 from the May 2023 Paper 2 exam: Referring to two works you have studied, discuss how the writers portray the significance of a journey. This is a great exemplar to use to see how a student does not use direct quotations. They don’t have any in this essay! And yet, it’s still good. How? There is enough detail given in the examples to support their claims that...