Paper 2: Sample Response 3 (Ghosts and The Bluest Eye)
This Paper 2 response is excellent in many regards. It addresses this question: How is “home” depicted in the two of the works you have studied and what is its significance? Notice that the question is in two parts; importantly, the student responds to both. It is a particularly long response. Whilst uncommon, a few students are able to write at this length. Of course, length is not in itself a measure of quality,...