Paper 1: Sample Response 7 (Men's Health ii)
Recently (in December 2020), we published a Paper 1 response to the front cover of the lifestyle magazine, Men's Health. Subscribers can find the response here. We marked it. It was a strong response, likely to receive a grade of 7. Here, on this page, we publish a much weaker response. The student, known to this writer, has outstanding attributes, and is dead set on improvement. Rather than mark the response, we...