May 2024 Paper 1: Sample Response 4 (Infographic)

A big part of our job is helping students move from satisfactory to specific and precise analysis of the writer’s choices. It’s something that never ends! And that’s okay. We meet students where they are in the belief we can help take them to a new, heightened awareness of how language works.
This week’s update is our 4th Paper 1 from the May 2024 exam session working with the infographic from the Africa Digital Media Foundation. It’s a response that focuses on the guiding question, is accurate enough in terms of language and expression, but is lacking in providing a convincing interpretation and good analysis of how language shapes meaning.
You can find the other three exemplars here, here, and here.
Best,
Tim and David