This week, we are publishing two more Paper 2 exemplars from the May 2023 exams.  We are also publishing a lesson plan using both exemplars.  The goal of that page is for students to have a big, broad discussion about these two new Paper 2s (1^st lesson) that leads into a granular sentence level analysis of the essays (2^nd lesson).  However, please modify, cut, or extend whatever you see fit to meet the needs of your students in your context.   

May 2023 Paper 2: Sample Response 2 (Question 4)

May 2023 Paper 2: Sample Response 3 (Question 4)

Make a Decision – Which Essay is Better and Why (Two Lessons)

Best,

Tim and David