November 2022 Paper 1: Sample Response 1 (First Dog on the Moon)

Thursday 6 April 2023

This week, we’ve added an exemplar from the November 2022 Paper 1 examination.  The response focuses on Text A, from the “First Dog on the Moon” cartoon series published in The Guardian Australia.  This particular extract is titled “First Dog on the Moon on… garbage gyres.”

You can find the model example response here.

The May 2023 exams are quickly approaching, and for those students sitting those exams, using this exemplar will offer them one more opportunity to read, discuss, and analyze what makes a response score so well. 

Best,

Tim and David


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