This week, we've been working on adding to our Paper 1 samples.  This sample response comes from the November 2021 examination session. 

As for the model example, if for nothing else, read the conclusion.  It's excellent.  It’s a wonderful example to use with students to show how not to be repetitive and to instead offer a valid alternative reading of the text.  The almost Marxist claims, perhaps without even knowing they are Marxist, offer an interesting final thought about the text.  This is how to do an alternative reading that works!

Subscribers can find the model example under the "November 2021 Paper 1s" heading.

Best,

Tim and David