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Answers: Student reponses to a 9 mark essay

Students were asked to respond to the following essay question: "To what extent does the concept of the Tragedy of the Commons explain crossing of the planetary boundaries? Various responses, along with annotated comments, are given here, along with a justification of the marks our teaching team awarded the answers I've used students' genuine essays and have not corrected the grammar or spelling. The first three...

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