8. Challenges to traditional East Asian societies: Graded student examples
On this page you will find sample essays on this topic, written by students and graded by examiners. We have also suggested activities that can be done with these essays.Discuss the significance of the unequal treaties after the First Opium War on China’s relations with the WestThis essay was written by a second year IB student. It was awarded 14/15. The examiner"s comments were:The essay is clearly focused and understands...