What is a 'tweakable' good essay?
Quite often we come across essays which score reasonably well but could have done much better with a little bit of tweaking. The teacher plays a big role here, not only in supervising the student in choice of examples, form of argument and essay outline, but also in the last interaction pointing to small improvements in the draft that can make a difference to the score. Here is an essay that is firmly in the 'Good'...