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May 2023 sample responses

The attached two responses are HL essays written for the May 2023 (TZ2) paper. One is relatively strong, the other significantly weaker. Students might benefit from comparing the two, considering each against the criteria and then reflecting on lessons that could be applied to their own writing. Although not without some minor flaws, this is a strong response to both passages in the May 2023 Paper. The student has...

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