2023 Sample response 1 - HL
Although not without some minor flaws, this is a strong response to both passages in the May 2023 Paper. The student has responded thoughtfully and capably to some key aspects of both content and style, as well as demonstrating capacity for the logical organisation of ideas. The sample response can be seen as a PDF and can be downloaded. The passages on which the responses are based are in the dropdown below: 5 out...