Paper 1 sample response (Keegan)
Standard Level response to The First World War by John KeeganThis passage was set in a Paper 1 examination a long time ago (2013) but is a good one to revisit as it is non-fiction and a useful reminder of the different kinds of prose extracts that can sometimes be selected. Following the response and the teacher's marks and comments, you will also find an annotated copy with some key aspects of the student's writing...