Paper 2 sample response (2024)

Monday 14 October 2024

HL Paper 2 response using Antigone by Sophocles and Drive Your Plow Over the Bones of the Dead  by Olga Tokarczuk.

This week we have published a sample Paper 2 response to one of the questions on the May 2024 TZ2 examination. The student uses Antigone by Sophocles and Drive Your Plow Over the Bones of the Dead  by Olga Tokarczuk in a response to the question about female heroism. 

The response is well balanced between the two text and uses relevant aspects of each to develop a fairly convincing comparison. That said, improvements could be made in all criteria, so it is useful to use such models with students and ask them to critique it, looking at what is good as well as what could be better. 

The sample can be seen at the page linked below and more paper 2 sample responses can be found at the link below that. Please note that all current samples on the site use the criteria for assessment up to and including examinations taken in 2025. The new, adapted critera, as outlined in this post here -  Changes to the course 2024  - are for first teaching in 2024 and first assessment in 2026. 

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Paper 2: sample responses

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