Film Portfolio: Exemplar Two

This Film Portfolio Contains Evidence of the following Roles: Sound Design, Cinematographer, Screenwriter
This portfolio scored a 4 for each film and a 3 for each section of pages. Let's take a look at where evidence of 'good' and 'excellent' work can be found.
Portfolio Exemplar
In most respects, this is an exemplary portfolio. Each of the film reels succeeds in getting a 4. Each set of pages shows most of what a portfolio needs, but each is missing at least one key element. Take a look at the reels, the pages, and the rubric, and see if you can figure out what is missing from each set of accompanying pages.
Here are the accompanying pages. We would score them 3/3/3. Take a look at the pages and the rubric and see what stops these otherwise excellent pages from receiving 4s.
Portfolio Pages, Annotated
For a more detailed look at why these pages scored well, we can break down the expectations into these guiding phrases from the rubric:
