Paper 2 - new sample response

Sunday 19 December 2021

After two years with no paper 2, it is now back for our current first year DP students and so we will be adding more materials for this assessment in the coming months

Linked from this page are some paper 2 sample responses with teacher marks and comments, including a new sample that has just been added.  We will be looking to add more examples, covering a range of different questions and different literary forms.  

It is important for teachers and students to look at a range of examples in order to become familiar with the expectations of this examination and how student work is assessed using the criteria. 

While many of the samples could be described as very good, they do vary in approach, style and quality; it is important for students to see that there is not one set way of responding to these questions, and it is also useful to look at examples in terms of what they get wrong or could do better, as well as those that do a lot of things right.

Paper 2 sample response #1: John Keats and Tony Harrison

The following example essay is written in response to a question about contradiction and paradox in literary works. It is a fairly strong response, using two poets, though not outstanding. Students...

Paper 2 sample response #2: Arthur Miller and Henrik Ibsen

The following response compares and contrasts two plays, 'Death of a Salesman' by Arthur Miller and 'Ghosts' by Henrik Ibsen. It has many strengths - showing thoughtful insight into both plays, and comparing...

Paper 2 sample response #3: Antigone and The White Tiger

The following Higher Level response compares and contrasts a play and a novel - Antigone by Sophocles and The White Tiger by Aravind Adiga - in response to the following question: In the past it was...

Paper 2 sample response #4: Persepolis and The Things they Carried

The following Standard Level response answers this Paper 2 question, comparing the graphic novel Persepolis by Marjane Satrapi and the collection of stories The Things they Carried by Tim O'Brien.

Paper 2 sample response #5: The Crucible and I, Tituba

What questions about power has your study of two works of literature raised?The following response compares a play, 'The Crucible' by Arthur Miller and the novel 'I Tituba' by Maryse Condé. It is well...