Higher Level response to Cherry Blossom Season by Catherine Marshall

Following the previous sample posted, this week we have added a HL student response to the second text on the May 2024 TZ2 Paper 1.

This response is good in all criteria although the exmainer comments also indicate where it could have been improved.  As ever, a useful approach is to ask students to read and assess the work first before looking at the marks and comments underneath.  

The sample can be seen at the page linked below and more paper 1 sample responses can be found at the link below that.